Breanna O’Connor
Bristol Community College Fall River Online boconnor13@bristolcc.edu
5/2/016
Dear Portfolio Committee
Hello, my name is Breanna O’Connor, a 21 years old returning student to Bristol community college,. I went to Bristol community college in 2013 for one semester, and then life took a small turn and I had to drop out, but I am back and happy to be continuing my education. Coming into this class I was nervous, as most people who know me know, I am not the best when it comes to writing. Growing up I was homeschooled, along with all of my other six siblings at the time, so it was hard for my mom to teach me one on one when I needed the help because she would be busy helping my other brothers and sisters, so I had to self teach myself my whole middle school and high school career. My Junior year I finally asked my mom to have me do online classes through Seton, a homeschool program where I would send my essays and have them graded, to my disappointment my self teaching did not do me justice at all, my first graded paper was a D, but I was given pointers by the online English teachers and when I graduated my Senior year I had a B+ in English. I have improved my writing skills, but I still have a ways to go. As you will notice in my essays, my focus was on working out, and fitness.
My first essay I am very proud of, it is my Memoir. “How I started a new lifestyle” This essay is about me, it shows a struggle in my life with asthma, the struggle of how I loved to run, but my asthma would always take over and leave me there trying to regain my breathing, how I had to hide my asthma from others. But also in this essay it brings in a new part of my life which a friend introduced to me, and how this changed my life my life forever. I added list which I still have from years ago into it, showing the workouts I was taught to do and the muscle groups.
My second essay “Gym environment”, this connects into my first essay in a way, this gives you a description of my friend who introduced me to lifting, it gives you an insight on his life and who he is as a person, also describes his diet a little bit. Gives a slight description of our group of friends who also workout, and gives a visual view of the gym we use.
My third essay for my portfolio is my Argument Essay, this brings you into a lifters life who takes steroids, and believe it or not, a good percentage of lifter use steroids, and to me as a fellow lifter it is saddening, because steroids take a huge toll on a person both mentally and physically, which you will see in my essay. This will tells you of the cons these have on your body and health. This essay brings you into the effects this drug has on both the male and female. The Medical and emotional downfalls it brings to you and your body.
I enjoyed learning and doing the different types of writing in this class, and I feel as though I did well in this class, which for me to say is not easy, because as I said before I am not great at writing, it is not my strong suite. Also thank you Holly for giving me pointers on my work through out this semester, you were helpful and I feel you have helped me improved my writing skills.
Sincerely
Breanna O’Connor